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Birth Of the Spirit Pony

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A young pegasis, tired of her years of bullying, ran from her home and all she knew, to a large icy mountain that she planned to freeze herself on. It was hard, and her wings gave out a quarter of the way she walked, only her anger and frustration fueled her, when she got to the top she cried out to the spirits she knew inhabited the mountain.

"TAKE ME!" she screamed through her tears, "I NO LONGER WISH TO LIVE AMONGST SUCH PONIES!!" she fell to the ground, wishing for it all to be over, an icy voice answered her.

"What do you have in return for us?" the voice said coldly "One does not simply join the ponies of the frost..." she stood up hearing this,

"my sight, and my feelings" she said thoughtfully "I have no need for either of these... I have seen to many cruelties and, felt to many heartbreaks..." 

"very well" the voice called out, a hurricane of snow whipping around the young pegasis, freezing her eyes, and dulling her feelings. She was amazed at all they did, but she hadn't died as she had planned,

"why have you not killed me!?!" she questioned, but the voice did not return "please..." tears came to her eyes, as she laid herself down... "please" she said quietly, holding back tears.

 

 

Weeks later a cold young pegasis walked into the town the other had left, leaving a trail of frost behind her, she could not see, and she couldn't remember this town she used to call home... the frost spirits had not just taken her sight and dulled her feelings, they had also taken her memories.

"Hey Forsty!!" a young colt called running up to her, "never thought i-" he stopped as she turned to him.

"who are you...?" she said in a monotone.

"Frosty...? I'm sorry..." he turned away looking back at her "I though you were somepony else. my mistake" he tried to smile as he walked off, leaving her there to question his words.

"Frosty..." she murmured to herself, trying to think, trying to remember the colt, he must have known her in some way, but why couldn't she remember him... "wait..!" she called after him, quickly catching up with him, her icy wings shining. "Who are you...?" she said her eyes sad, in her other wise emotionless face

"I'm Dropping Pine" he smiled, looking over her cutie mark assuring himself she wasn't who he though, "you?"

"I-" she started, remembering she hadn't a name. "I don't remember..."

"you don't know you're name?" he laughed nervously, she was silent as his laughter died away, she remembered something... spirit ponies, that's it, that must be her name.

"I'm a Spirit Pony..." she smiled, at what she thought to be her identity,

"d'you have a home then miss?"

"no... I cant say I do, I just came from the mountain" she turned her head looking up at the mountain she'd just came from.

"oh, well you cant stay there, you can come stay with me if you want. We have an open room." he said taking her hoof

"oh... no, no thank you..." she opened her wings, and lifted herself into the air, the snowflakes in her wings, and hair shining brilliantly. "but thank you..."

 

 

She left... the one pony that'd remember her, longer then anyone. he'd remember her until he died though she kept living as "the spirit pony" she now was.

The brave young colt, who offered her a home with him, had been her brother... he'd never see her again, as long as he lived.

...my pony The Spirit Pony by 99fluffball ... her story... or the beginning of it, this occurred before the time of Discord... thousands of years ago.

 

her name was Mystic Frost.  

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Zel-the-Wolf's avatar
If there was ever to be a prequel to the MLP-FIM saga, this should definitely be included in it. Though it may have to be a happier ending, since they don't seem to understand that sometimes sadness feels good over there...